Hey I quite liked the story but I would have preferred more images. I also noticed there were some brackets in odd places occasionally, I wouldn't normally comment on that in a jam but when text is the primary element, I think it has to 100% perfect. I've done the pick a path thing myself before and it's very enjoyable. I used Google sites as it's easy to put in the images and text and to link buttons etc, I used AI to create it all. If you are interested at all: https://sites.google.com/view/differentdestinations/home