As far as real feedback, I like how much information is included here without it feeling overcrowded, and the game concept gives a clear objective that lends itself well to a one-page rpg.
Mmm... Taco Taco :-D Glad you liked that!
Thanks for the feedback. That is what I was going for. I've read a number of one-page rpgs and seems that balance can be a bit tricky, enough to get the imagination going and feel like you have a game on your hands, but not so much that it really should be more pages. I hope you enjoy the game.