I feel like like it started out well but then just became a rhythmic atonal bass that was tough to listen through. I get what you were trying to go for but the only sections that felt engaging was the first half of It all Fell Apart and Restoration.
I feel like I'm sounding a bit harsh...
Your first and last track sound great but I think the second track needs a bit more oomph... something in the upper frequency whether it's an Atonal melody or something to keep it a bit more engaging.