Awesome! The story you wrote here is very cute and pretty original, and the soundtrack goes very well with it.
I really like how with the more intense tracks, you never let the listener get too comfortable, by creating a loop that stays mostly the same but with changes every time - maybe with a drum break, maybe with more or less instruments, but it's never exactly the same. It really helps to keep you guessing, and help maintain the atmosphere.
With the calmer tracks, you still change things up, but in way nicer way - you develop the music based on what came before in a very nice way. It makes sure that the music doesn't repeat too much, and keeps it interesting.
I also wanted to say that i love your melodies! They're all great and pretty memorable - i could sort of repeat to you what i heard after only one time, which is mighty impressive.
The only thing that brought this down for me was the production - it felt a bit too muddy, and it kind of bugged when the music is fading out, but the tick-tock seems to be only barley fading. Overall the production is pretty good actually, but those hiccups kept it from greatness (to me at least). (Btw, i'm not claiming to be some expert producer, but i just liked so many things about this submission, that i had to say what brought it down for me)
Overall, really good! I can't wait to hear more of your stuff :)