Honestly, quite better than I expected! I'm very interested to know how this will continue, nice job! May I ask what did you use to make the models and all?
Is there a community Discord server or something like that? It's a pretty nice tool to keep track and stay up to date with this kind of stuff :)
Also, a Walkthrough that tells you what choices lead to what outcomes could be pretty nice.
If possible, you could also add a "gallery" option to see the unlocked scenes, like some other VNs do.
Hey! Nice to read that you liked my game, unfortunately, I don't know if I'll put this development on standby. I've received mostly bad reviews and even lost some Patreons since the last update.
I don't like to leave things unfinished, but is not encouraging to work on a project with a lot of bad reviews.
By the way, I used Honey Select 2 for the graphics, there is a discord server if you want to learn: https://discord.gg/illusionsoft
That's awful to hear :(
For what it's worth, I think the story you're setting up is pretty interesting. Some things do need some polishing, but I can see this going places. All I can say is that good things take some time, and that I believe learning from bad reviews and deciding what to apply to improve is the way (at least in part) to success.
I know this comes from nowhere, but if you think you'd continue with some help, I'm willing to volonteer, consider it a collaboration, to help you develop the story. I know nothing of Ren'py, but I do know a bit about writing and more about cinematography and image and video editing, and I also speak Spanish, which I think would make things way easier for you (I'm typing this in English purely so other people can understand it if they read it).
Unfortunately, I'm not in an economic position to support a patreon, but I can tell you if I were, I'd strongly consider supporting this.
I thought it looked like Honey Select 2, but I wasn't sure, you did a great job with the models.
