A very relatable final like. I like this story, it's got a charm to it. It has a flair of the wild west, especially with those bandanas.
There were some hiccups in the flow of the story, mainly word choice, and grammar of some sentences. The sudden exposition in the middle of the story was a bit jarring.
All in all, you did good. I look forward to the improvements you make to your story telling skills in the future.