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A jam submission

An Injury to OneView project page

As labor negotiations fail on a far-flung mining colony, one desperate miner finds herself scrambling for survival.
Submitted by whenimtired — 2 hours, 57 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall#53.9703.970
Concept & Originality#64.1364.136
Adherence to the Theme#73.9553.955
Flow & Clarity#93.8183.818

Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Another blue on blue tale. This time with dorfs. I felt her plight upon seeing that she just traded one scrape with death for the start of another.

An evocative and intense story, it paints a picture of resilience, survival, and the ongoing fight against oppressive corporate interests in a space-age setting. Beautifully layered and emotionally charged!

Submitted

Dwarves seem to be the theme of this jam, but this story really stood out to me. I like the dwarf-on-dwarf violence and I think it adds a lot of depth to the faction for them not to be a monolithic bloc.  Dwarves as both the striking miners and the corporate strikebreakers gets full points for Concept & Originality from me!

Submitted

A very relatable final like. I like this story, it's got a charm to it. It has a flair of the wild west, especially with those bandanas.

There were some hiccups in the flow of the story, mainly word choice, and grammar of some sentences. The sudden exposition in the middle of the story was a bit jarring.

All in all, you did good. I look forward to the improvements you make to your story telling skills in the future.

Submitted

Solidarity!

Excellent story!