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Trying to make a story based game is a risky move in game jams, as you sacrifice gameplay over narrative. In this entry in particular the only resemblance of gameplay is just turning a switch on and off without any form of comprehensive feedback for the player. Even if the action of turning the switch is as simple as a mouse click, I was not sure if I was doing the right thing, which comes as a result of the game lacking proper feedback for the player. But the meats and potatoes of this entry is clearly the story; which I found confusing and not that engaging. I understand that you tried to replicate the feeling of a horror movie, but the way the events are presented in the story makes them feel incoherent and random, and by the end of the game I didn't get anything from the narrative. Still, I respect your attempt of creating a unique and risky entry for the jam, and I would like to see a better version of this game with a better presentation and a cohesive narrative.

thanks for the feedback and I can't work on the project because the file broke😪