Whoa, this is super professionally formatted and laid out! It's legitimately like a book, that's awesome! The story is also very solid throughout, and it creates a unified adventure well. The body falling through the window is an especially powerful start, as is the battle with the quickly-disappearing apparition seeking the coin to be returned.
I had wondered while I was reading whether the coin actually does anything special, especially if the party defeats the apparition the second time around. I feel like pretty much any character I'd wanna roleplay would be super curious about that and risk battling the apparition to find out. I'm sure that could be added by a GM though anyway :D
- ✨Beth