I keep saying again and again that the story is being rewritten from scratch and are fixing the pacing and characters personalities. Scroll down and read my replies from the feedbacks that are similar to yours. The new rewritten demo is being proofread right now, and the pacing and characters are much more polished and better. We have listened to all of your feedbacks and came with the decision to rewrite the whole story from scratch. The MC's fractured ribs play a big factor to the story along with his fear, and confusion being in a world completely different from his, and that will include his health as well, his body will have to adapt to the world. Rest assured, the new rewritten demo and chapter one is looking much better than the old script.