Good anti-utopia story, and i personally feel like adding the path of going from defiant to submissive would make sence, because:
1) The way the story is going it looks like a "status quo breaks protagonist" type anti-utopia. Having the judge and his goons put protagonist "back in line with the rest of society" will definetly reinforce that feel.
2) It would give depth to the judge and goons as characters. Right now they feel like rapy assholes for the fun of it, while with this change they would become a keepers of "normalicy" they were set out to be.
3) This would make for interesting inner conflict that can be represented with Spirit stat and Willpower superstat. If the protagonist stays defiant, then she will be sure of her feelings. If the Spirit and Willpower are going down, than the woman starts thinking that the whole rebelion was "a bad idea that was going nowhere from the start".
4) Endings will have more payoff. Getting freedom would feel more deserved after withstanding everything. New ending would have protagonist reluctantly or enthusiastically "accept her place in life" and would give the sence of dread the game is set out to give.
It is just my oppinion and to fulfill it the game will have to be greatly remade, but i felt like sharing my thoughts here.
Thank you for the game.