I absolutely see your point, however female characters becoming submissive is simply not my kink, it turns me off immediately, and when I'm turned off I don't write smut ;)
As for the judge and the goons - they're one-dimentional by design, the whole point of this fantasy is, how do I put this, narrative power subversion? The only multidimensional character is the protagonist, the men here exist only to be cruel assholes for the player's pleasure ;) The victim is the only person the narrative sees as human, the abusers are dehumanized tools. That's just the way I like my porn ;)
Thanks for the comment, it's great to talk about this game :D