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The best visuals I've ever seen in a VN, bar none. Beautiful, with careful attention to detail, lighting effects, and humans who have progressed out of Uncanny Valley.

The story is a mix of lazy erotica and interesting interpersonal dynamics. While the relationship with the wife Justine seems at first glance to be an obvious and lazy way of giving you a woman for whom you'll feel no loyalty, the relationship is merely strained, not ruined. There are multiple times that it seems like you could focus the entire VN on repairing this relationship rather than anything else. There's hope for your marriage. The "daughter" Kailey (who might not be MC's daughter, for those of you skeeved out) is just as beautiful, and fulfills a man's natural desire to be needed. The relationship with her is rushed, lazy, lustful, and uninteresting. She goes from new-found acquaintance to sex toy in an instant, with virtually no lead-up. This section of the story seems like it should have been enough of a focal point that it would have gotten a lot of attention, and been developed into a plot of seduction (on her part or MC's), with tension between desires and the impropriety of it. Instead, she surprises MC with her desire, that tension is given a little lip service in his thoughts, and then it's on to sex. It's so rushed that the eroticism is ruined. I would have found this far less disappointing if the story had focused on the eroticism rather than the pornography of showing another sex act. The side piece from work, Cassidy, provides plenty of that on her own.

Speaking of the side piece, here are more mixtures of good and bad writing. She serves to introduce us to MC's sex addiction, which might have been a very interesting story element to explore (may still be in the future, if it's treated with some seriousness and not just used as an excuse for more sex). However, her "serial monogamy," as she puts it, and her devotion to MC just doesn't fit her personality at all; she decides out of nowhere that this anonymous hookup partner is going to be her one and only, at least for a while, even though he's married. It's an obvious lie, too, since she's been having sex with the barista girl. She is, on the whole, very sketchy, and untrustworthy. However, MC blunders into telling her about the sexual tension between him and Kailey (even though that tension lasts less than a day), putting him at great risk. It seems like this oversexed receptionist is being set up to be a villain who ruins MC's life because he's too careless to: 1) not tell anyone about his extra-marital affairs, 2) keep his desire for Kailey a secret, and 3) verify that the barista she presents to MC as a sexual gift is at least old enough that he won't end up in jail. That last one is a bit more flexible because she could be legal and younger than 18 or at least 18 and still too young to legally consent, depending on the player's local laws, but since nothing establishes her age, and Miss Side Piece is being perfectly set up to blackmail (or worse) MC, it seems like just another risky point that's going to come back to hurt him. He's more careful to not get taken advantage of by the girl who thinks she might be his daughter, who wants him for nothing but curiosity, than by the slut who gets everything she wants just by offering easy sex. If it turns out that the completed VN has her as a villain who uses MC's careless sex addiction to ruin him and line her pockets, I'll be impressed at how well that was set up. If not, then me mentally shouting, "No, you fool! You can't trust this bitch at all!" was for nothing. I hope it pays off somehow.

There's a promising story with MC's boss that has yet to develop. You're given the option to take a dominant or submissive path with her. In any other kind of VN this might just be a good or bad choice, but since this is an erotic VN and she's a hot woman, I'm assuming it will lead to another sexual affair where you get to either dominate or submit to her. It's a good setup, handled well, because you're left wondering more about the effects your choices will have on MC's job than on whether you're going to eventually see her wearing a slave collar or a strap-on.

The relationship with the wife is also promising. There are a few ways it's hinted that Wife and Kailey are a little too familiar to just think of each other as strangers or rivals (so far they haven't known each other long enough to be anything but both), but instead see each other as a desired sexual partner. I'm a bit worried this is going to be forced on us, instead of being a choice. I could see the plot developing where Wife and Daughter get a little too drunk, start talking about their mutual lust for MC, and end up all over each other. If would be wonderful if we're given the choice between a bisexual wife and daughter, or keeping both of them straight, while still getting a threesome. I'm not personally into getting cuckolded, even by a woman, so I'd prefer it's a choice. It's pretty obvious that the plot is leading to Wife finding out about Kailey being MC's sex doll, and Wife being perfectly okay with it, as long as she gets dicked on the regular. That's fine, I just hope it's more interesting than the plainly predictable plot we've seen a hundred times in other games. Her being the MC's wife, and the complexity of their relationship, is another plot element that has a lot of promise. So much so that an entire VN could be written based on nothing else but this one relationship, with or without any erotic elements.

This game's visuals are simply astounding, and it's worth checking out for that alone.

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Choices I hope to see in future updates:

* When Wife confronts MC about impregnating Kailey, she demands a blood test, since the girl might not be his daughter at all. Will you accept her as your pregnant sex doll daughter without question, or verify the truth? Unrealistic but possibly beneficial choice would be to decide as the player if she's his real daughter or the daughter he's always wanted, even though she's just a stranger. The game almost, but doesn't quite, have incest. Give us a choice for it to be incest for real, or just a relationship with a sweet girl who has daddy issues.

* Wife and Kailey might be open to having sex with each other, giving you a full sex triangle. Do you encourage them to challenge their sexual limits, or do you enforce monogamy on them, allowing you to be the only one who sexually satisfies both? Either option is sexy.

* Since I happen to love the dominant/submissive relationship, I hope you are given the choice to pursue that dynamic (flipped either way, of course) with MC's boss, rather than the workplace choices so far given only leading to job success. Just an idea, but it would be fun if the boss were into pain, either as a masochistic sub or a sadist dom, but not in a way that forces the MC to be into pain as well (she wants to deliver or receive pain for her pleasure, not MC's).

* Either Miss Side Piece is actually being set up to be villainous, or we need a lot more choices governing how MC's relationship with her develops. I would have chosen not to tell her the truth about the issues with Kailey, for instance. But, sometimes your MC has to do something stupid, so I get it. I hope there's more choice given in the future, though.

* When Boss Lady finds out about MC's affair with the receptionist, I hope there's an option for it to be a threesome, and I hope that if we choose to dominate or submit to the boss, Side Piece joins in on the fun and plays along. Having two subs or doms is better than one, after all.

* Kailey and the barista are close in age, have the same interest (MC), and have similar sexual experiences (also MC) so wouldn't be too intimidated by each other. Will you encourage them to be friends or do you keep your secret by making sure they never meet? Maybe she wants to work as a barista, now that she quit her job? If you decide Wife and Kailey are bisexual now, then Kailey and Barista should get it on. Or, maybe they both think it's hot to be friends who share a sexy Daddy, like sisters.

* It's probably beyond the possibility for an erotic visual novel to give us the option to either repair MC's marriage or continue down the dark path he's on in the beginning (basically, make two stories with little in common with each other). Like I said, the marriage problems could be a whole VN without the daughter or anything else added, the sky is the limit here. But, some limited choices with her would be wonderful. Do you keep your wife happy or force her to accept your infidelity and sex addiction? Do you choose to be with Kailey instead, and let the wife go? Do you try to change the wife, and do you do it for her benefit or yours?

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lol nuggies pls