Very nice! Seems pretty fleshed out and solid.
The people coming in and out as they talk is a nice visual touch, and the portraits themselves are very well done. My only notes are:
- Maybe consider some more expressive portraits for different emotions, possibly just changing their faces for more dynamic storytelling.
- Why is it that sometimes the first part of the line is already typed out when changing dialogue boxes? Is it because of a skip button or something?
- What engine are you using? If it's Gamemaker, I can tell you how to get rid of the awkward text wrapping thing.
And here's my game for the feedback trade: https://wasabiiii.itch.io/grass-elemental-demo-demo
Looking forward to this one, it looks really cool!