Great job on the sound design.
It's worth listening to your creation with headphones to enjoy the stereo.
Personally, I found some of the sounds too extreme in terms of panning. It sometimes lacked left-right balance and/or harmonic coherence with the orchestral composition (and some sounds were a little loud).
Whereas your voice was put into Ping Ping delay with less extreme panning. It tied in better with the whole.
I loved the rhythm and groove initiated by the timpani from 1'50" onwards.
Overall, it's very good. All these sounds and your voice make the atmosphere unique and I really liked it.