Cool game, it has some solid interaction quality and an interesting message!
The dialogue seems to tie the ideas together nicely, but maybe the narrative can be driven a little more with symbolism the screen indicators? You've got it going on already, like the tumblr link storyline being activated by clicking the URL, but I would say to expand upon it some more. Maybe the ellipsis can be other symbols, instead of just three dots on a screen? Just my two cents.
I could use some feedback over here if you don't mind: https://wasabiiii.itch.io/grass-elemental-demo-demo
I've never used bitsy, I'll have to check that out as a budding pixel artist. It looks like a great place to start, especially for making games.