This was a very cool take on the theme - looking out the window at space felt very real, and so did landing and dropping into a mine, the atmosphere was also nicely creepy and sci-fi-esque. I have a few suggestions:
- The voiceover felt a little funny in comparison to the tone of the game, perhaps going for a more serious tone and adding a radio filter effect could add value to the game.
- I recommend adding a container for your dialogue UI/bottom bar - because white on white makes it unreadable at times (attaching a picture below)
- Sometimes in the mine I felt a bit directionless, it might be an idea to add checkpoints like lighting up torches on the way, at times I didn't know where to go and couldn't be guided by visual cues or lighting as I was relying on my flashlight.
Thanks for the cool game!