Hello! It was great to try "Echoes of Loss." It's a really nice debut for a first entry, so congrats on that. If you're open to feedback, here are some suggestions:
- I'd love to see the visuals align more with the theme as I progress through the stages of grief. I've heard that the assets are from a pack, but I still encourage you to experiment with color palettes and background storytelling.
- The character movement feels a bit odd; it gets stuck when colliding with walls, and the last section makes the character much faster. I recommend checking out some YouTube tutorials on how to address these issues. There are plenty of helpful ones available.
- Adding some sound and music could make a significant difference. You might want to take a look at Brackeys' Bosca Ceoil tutorial. It's straightforward, and you can create something quickly.
Overall, it's a really promising submission, and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!