Wow, this is such a great feedback. You didn't just tell me what is good or bad, you even told me what you felt, on top of being able to explain why it felt that way to you. This is very helpful, thank you.
I have written about 6k words combined for 2 branches in which either Elizabeth or Damian is the protagonist. But I noticed several glaring weaknesses in my writing especially when writing flashbacks (I had a hard time applying the golden rule of writing, "Show, don't tell", with flashbacks. For now, at least). So either I level up my skill first or find a better way to write.
Either way, sequels/spin-offs might be a way off, but I'm confident I can fix the bite ending, music choice, and several other points as per your suggestion pretty soon, so thank you :)
Thank you for the encouragement also. I hope the same goes for you. Keep up the good work and have fun making games!