Yo, cool composition! I bet if you took more than 4 hours it would've been much more polished.
Overall I like it!
but from a mixing POV the drums felt a bit off for me in the mix, the bass drum had noticable bass frequencies which I believe losing them a bit would have made it feel more in tune with the genre, and I believe the drumset itself could have been flattened a bit to give it that final touch.