Hello! Welcome to Feedback Quest 5! It's nice to meet you! My name's Hythrain. I'm part of the FQ team and a hobbystreamer. I'm writing this review live after having played your game.
Canadian! Canadian! Canadian! I'm so glad to not only see someone who I know is a Canadian, but has made their game about places in Canada! As someone from the Toronto area who has also been to Gare Centrale in Montreal (I've been to Otakuthon a couple times), this was just so cool to see! I will 100% be playing more of this!
My biggest criticisms are a lack of sprites seen throughout the prologue and... well, a lot of errors in the writing. I suspect English isn't your first language? I'd suggest having a few sprites in the prologue to liven things up, even if it's not a whole lot. As for the writing errors, I'd like to offer my own assistance in this endeavor. As Mayshing/Altabestudio (one of the hosts for the FQ main events) can verify, I have some experience with story writing. I'd love to help a fellow Canadian out!
I only played through the prologue at this time, since I'm trying to cover all games and can't spend too much time on each one yet. However, this is 100% on my list for a more thorough play-through.