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Wow. That's just so extremely...mean. Didn't know that comments nowdays have the purpose to belittle the story... It's not constructive criticism to say that sth was boring. Seriously.

If you don't like sth how about going somewhere else entirely?

And if one is inclined to comment regardless at least be a decent human being while at it.

There is not a single interactive fiction out there that has been easy to write. Creating something like that is so fucking hard and time- consuming. It's a blessing that authors share their art with us at all.

I really don't think you should feel entitled to put such a disheartening comment under other peoples work...

It can really Hurt and that shouldn't be one's goal.

TheUnknownXX1 year ago(+1)(-14)

Awh Boohoo, sorry not everyone's a girl. Not my fault male authors take criticism better especially when they're not wokies who care more about diversity than a good story.

Also most IF are mediocre tbh, it all started with COG being lame and HG being terrible, then HG in 2016 had 2 gems and now its become bigger since.

Also most authors just copy Wayhaven and Fallen Hero or other works, most of them are bad, this one is just lame. Shame its still active while the good ones end at the first chapter lol

adri1 year ago (1 edit) (+3)

While I agree with some of your statements, I think it's essential to consider that the reason the story seems simple so far is because it's a demo. I'm sure that as more updates get released we'll see the story grow to be more dramatic and thrilling.

You mentioned that this story is intended for a female audience simply because the MC worked as a waiter and has sleepovers. What do those two things have anything to do with the MC's gender???

Also, what's the point of you playing IF games when you think the majority of them are mediocre? Making that sexist comment about men taking criticism better than women was also completely unnecessary. I think your original post was pretty solid in terms of criticism, but all your other replies afterward are just rude and lack any tact.

TheUnknownXX1 year ago(+1)(-12)

Sorry "sexism" is reality with most male authors taking better criticism better. My experiences with female authors has been terrible, while almost all male authors I've criticized say thank you and take it well. I've had a few female authors who were good but the rest were terrible.

In fact most female authors ignore criticism well, Wayhaven's author has been known to do this with even her majority female fans complaining lol.

"You mentioned that this story is intended for a female audience simply because the MC worked as a waiter and has sleepovers. What do those two things have anything to do with the MC's gender???"

These are female activities in general, how many male characters in fiction do these things? This is the first I've ever seen in my life whether it be a book, IF, tv show, comics, etc.

Also you said its just the first chapter, bruh the first chapter is suppose to be the best, if chapter 1 is this boring I can only imagine what the rest of it would be. But hey I'm not following this story anyways, one of the most mediocre IF stories I've seen on itch but fangirls will disagree as usual.

Zapppp320 days ago(+4)

"These are female activities in general" I'm a dude, so I get it can kinda suck sometimes when a lot of IF's are targeted towards women. It is what is right? But what is feminine about being a waiter? Like there are tons of waiters, and you could say it's a female dominated industry, but plenty of dudes are nurses too? It's just such a nothing point. And although yeah sleep overs are more feminine, plenty of dudes have sleep overs, I I had sleepovers when I was younger. Also, it'd be better to explain why the story was boring then just saying it was. It's not my favorite, but you offer bad criticism, y'know?

KAL315 days ago(+3)

I'm a dude that likes sleepovers so I can get to play videogames with my friends all night. I don't see what's feminine about having your friends sleep over and hang out. that's just loads of bullcrap you're spitting.

TheUnknownXX306 days ago(-7)

You have sleepovers with your femboy friends, sure. Also yes you are a dude, not a man so I'm not surprised. But again go be butthurt and simp for this mediocre story. I'd rather re read Fallen Hero which actually has good writing compared to this

alli302 days ago

this is getting out of hand so im gonna ask that everyone just leaves the issue alone now.

i get it, you don't like my story and that's fine but please, for the love of God, find something better to do than argue back and forth with people in comment sections.

alli1 year ago(+3)(-1)

thanks so much for all the unsolicited "criticism", i'll be sure to keep them in mind moving forward.

uofmtechie1 year ago(+3)

Ignore them. They obviously have a chip on their shoulder about female authors. Please don’t let it get you down.

sleepenjoyer1 year ago(+3)(-1)

you complain about male authors not caring about diversity so they're more better when you're commenting right now about how this IF isn't diverse enough for you because the MC's supposedly written like a female.. lmao, it's ironic, really

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