I like the art, the music. The writing is good, a bit repetitive or lenght in some parts like other person said. I still don't mind it be too sweet or something like that. Just entertaining and it got me focused. It is just cute. There's a good concept you could develop on.
I'll follow you to see how do you evolve. Keep on doing it!
Edit: I forgot to mention that it was the first game that dragged my attention. The colors or something, not sure why but I've finally had time to play it.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to play! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed the art, music and overall concept of the game.
I appreciate you noting where the writing could be tightened up in some areas - repetition and pacing seems to be the thing I unconsciously did often. At the same time, by telling me how the sweet tone doesn't bother you as much overall, you helped me narrow down where I should improve even further.
And I'm happy to hear you are looking forward to my growth. Knowing people are interested in what I do next is great motivation. Please feel free to provide any other thoughts or suggestions in the future too - it all helps me make even better games.
Yes, I can relate to that. Sometime it's difficult to identify what actually grabs my attention too when I'm surfing the web, even harder to identify it in others. Grabbing attention like this is probably what every successful content creators had to figure out in the beginning.
Thank you again for the feedback and support! Feedback like yours really helps me improve as a creator.
