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...WTH did I just play...? :')

I am not a fan of shota but I will try to judge this as objectively as I can ROFL

Art is absolutely awesome, I love the artstyle very much. The story is... perhaps would be enjoyable to fans of the genre; tho it seems to me the 'magical' part is only relevant at the beginning (I didn't play till the end because there are still other games to rate sorry). The writing style I think have a ton of unnecessary stuffs that can be trimmed imho. Overall I can see the effort put into this.

Thanks for participating!

For the story, I did consider writing a deeper plot for the magical part, but I realized it would be better to test the idea first with a small project. I'm glad I did. It's clear now the lack of writing skill is noticeable enough for players to mention it. So that's probably where I'm going to focus my learning for a while. I'm glad you like the art style though. I honestly didn't expect to get a high rating in any category, but the aesthetic is very well-received.

It was fun. 

Thank you for the review and for hosting the game jam.