Thanks for your analysis! I'm happy to know someone actually took the time to download and try my first game, even if it was so extremely simple.
You're right about the story, I had an idea in mind but I wasn't able to implement it because I had a trip coming up and had to finish the core mechanics, but I'll do better in my next jam :>
Im not home right now but when I get back I'll be sure to give your submission a try; cheers, GamExplorer!