This is a lovely, really clean game that works beautifully. Very enjoyable to play and especially impressive as a solo project. Characterization was strong. I've marked down on originality and theme because otherwise it wouldn't be fair to teams who are less strong execution but have taken on something really challenging. But it works beautifully and is so nice and clear. It would be interesting to see where you take the story if you continue to work on it. Well done!