Story is good, and I liked when m a g e n t a showed up. That was really cool. Final thing looks impressive and dialogues are good. Buuut audio is... Painful. Helicopter's chirping was very loud and annoying :( Everything else I liked!
I like that you liked the things I focused on the most for this jam. The audio though... not the first game, where someone says I didn't do great in this regard. I think I need to collaborate with an audio guy next time.
I'm not THE audio guy, but I think I'm not bad with audio and voiceover (check my game if you're interested) so write me for collaboration if you'll be interested :)