I'm glad you enjoyed it! Jonter's art really brought an edge of quality to it.
And yes, I feel like I have a tendency to write any psychological thing too dramatically. I need to shake that bad habit soon.
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I don't necessarily think it is a bad habit. Might be just how I perceive Ina based on her stream and her representation here go against my impression of her personality, and it stood out especially because of how other myth members here are so well represented.
Other than that, your story writing is really engaging!