Okay, so the general experience has been good, I have to admit that I had a natural jumpscare when opening a door and not expecting an enemy and I think for the duration time of the Jam it is quite a big map.
As a suggestion I would remove the possiblity to follow the train tracks in the final bit before the escape since I started following them only to realize that I was walking through the first railtrack and then I had to backtrack all my way back to the beggining and then exit.
It would be awesome to have a way to kill the clown since there are times that he follows you and you cannot dodge him which is kind of frustrating.
Regarding the story, I don't get it since it is a game about scaping a place that you enter voluntarily, and then I think I glimpsed something about a romance in the notes but I'm not sure about anything at all.
In conclusion I enjoyed the experience, it is one of the best games any of our 14 members from the team has played and I would recommend people to play this game.