Nice! We all love survivor island stories of course, although this one was cut very short indeed. I am also quite confused about why the killers were so happy to have her shoot him and escape? Confuses me a little bit.
Also, and I know this isn't the point of the story, but it seems clear to me that these heavily armed thugs ought to keep prisoners instead of killing them outright - just for purely mathematical purposes. Math:
- Evil Killer (21 days left)
- Prisoner (Caught at 7 Days in, x days left.)
--> Kill immediately -> if no other prisoners are caught, Killer leaves in 14 days.
--> Keep prisoner for 7 days (now 'worth' 14 days, Killer has 14 days left) & then kill -> 14-14 = 0 -> Killer leaves immediately (=after 7 days, not 14).
This isn't a criticism per say, because it actually allows for better stories as the killers would have an incentive not to just murder people outright (provided they are 'fresh' enough, of course), but just an observation re: the system.