Oh! Thank you so much for the revisions!
I'll add them to release with the next 10 creatures.
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Yeah I love the creativity of this module so much. The art adds beautifully to the evocative descriptions you give. Having stats translated into so many NSR games makes this highly versatile. I am also learning a good metric for translating other monsters on my own now.
However this has a TON of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. Sometimes I don't even know what you're trying to say. Makes it hard to read in areas.