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Congrats on finishing that much during the jam, even if I understand it might be frustrating to submit just a demo!

The beginning of the story is exciting, and the notebook game mechanic that you're hinting at sounds very interesting, I'm always looking for new ways to make twine games!

Awesome use of music and sound!! And I really like the art you choose for the tarot card. Fun characters too, I love how you conveyed their interplay :)

If you keep working on this game, may I suggest spending some time on the text formatting too? With the great mood you create in writing and audio, I felt like the bold blue links dragged me out of the story a bit because they didn't really match the rest.


Good luck with the rest of it!!

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Thank you!!! Oh yea, thanks to iVillain for the tarot cards! They are indeed awesome! :D
Yes! I do my best to integrate more formatting into the game. It is something that I wish to do even more!
Thank again for the feedback! :D