Unique sounding song - I think the charmer idea fits it well. Having some more ornamentation/variation in the repeats of the melody as the tensions swells would make it more jazz sounding to me. I especially liked the end where there was two melody lines going at once.
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Thank you! I definitely felt an emptiness in the track at some parts but ended up with what I’ve decided to call “jazz paralysis”: knowing I should add more -> not knowing what to add -> 404 muses not found -> realizing time is short, -> brief moment of panic -> ultimately making zero changes 😎 On the bright side, good feedback helps me learn more about jazz :)