There is a clear and nice ambiance to this game, and I loved your work on the newspapers.
The tone and writing in them were really cool.
The pacing is a little slow. I have quit the game because I was not sure of what to expect for the rest of it, and I grew frustrated of not being able to stop some parts of my factory.
Maybe making it turn-based, or allowing the player pause/speed-up time, could have made the game better.
Overall, a really nice setting for a well delivered gloom ambiance.