I've gone back and played again and I have to say I enjoyed it more this time around. I knew the way to go and what to do and the experience felt more cohesive. I caught more of the first time the entity ran out of sight the animation is really good.
The extra dialogue is really good in the last section. Is that the end?
Just noticed your entry to scream jam 2021 Halloween night 1999. That was my first game jam and submission. I’ll be sure to check out your entry.