here's your homework lmao:
the song is really repetetive and it stays at the same intensity for way too long, the octave sax+trumpet is way weaker than what you probably wanted
in general the song feels weak because of the lack of sustained sounds
also the repetition makes the "drop" weaker too because it's on the same level with no extra instruments or change really
the song lacks dynamics, everything is on the same volume throughout the entire song
the bridge was definetly the best part because it finally wasn't repeating that same melody line and brought something new to the song
I'm not even going to comment on how expensive those SWAM instruments are and how much you underutilised them (please for the love of god do some automation😭)
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I appreciate the feedback. I am always trying to improve my music so getting genuine feedback is nice.
I do have 1 complaint however, I intentionally made the melody repetitive because I wanted to fit the vibe of an endless maze, unsure of whether you are treading the same ground or not. I tried to make the repetitiveness more engaging by constantly adding new instruments but that didn't seem to work for you which I understand.
I agree with all the other criticisms though. I definitely could have done better with the dynamics and I am still new to the SWAM instruments which is why they feel underbaked.