Hi there!
Thank you for the feedback! It was fun for me too since this was the first time I played around with sprite animations besides fade and dissolve.
And yes, now that you mentioned it, I feel the same way about the twins' argument and Yuuka's monologue. But I didn't even notice Yuzu's script being a problem, So thank you for bringing that up to my attention, I will keep all of this in mind if I update the game later.
Actually, I just made a remake of this game with replaced visuals and audio assets. Too bad I didn't read your feedback before finishing it. If I did, then I could have prevented the mistake about the story and the sprite's default position.
And yes, if you or other players are more familiar with certain aesthetics in VN, then I think it would be a good idea for me to mimic that. So thank you for telling me about that too. It's something I would likely miss for a while if not for you.
Thank you! I'm also looking forward to talking with you again in the future. It's nice to see a fellow VN dev succeeding and growing. So I wish you well and success in your endeavor. Cheers!