Sure, I can do that. Here is the corrected sentence:
The gameplay loop isn’t bad, but it needs more technical improvement.
First of all, the UI needs to be more consistent. Some menu items were drawn while some were real images.
The UI Scaling needs to be improved: The fonts kept changing sizes, some items were way too big while some were okay sized.
Apparently, after purchasing pudding and grabbing an item from the fridge, I got this error:
