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That was fun! Just a couple of minor notes.

Your psuedo-terminal formatting, while thematic, made parts of the story much harder to read than necessary. Similarly, I'd recommend Italics rather than ALL CAPS for the robot dialog--all caps is surprisingly hard to read.

I also wish you'd managed to fit some of the actual working together into your submission, rather than just giving a footnote about it. The 1k word limit is pretty challenging, though, so I understand why that didn't happen.

Definitely one of the better submissions I've read so far!