Oooh, breaking it into 3 chapters was a neat idea. I must confess I read this aloud in character as if I was a curmudgeonly Mark Hamil thinking it was about a Robot Legion Warrior until I saw hints of Dwarf. Then I shrugged and kept doing it. When I got to the bit where he gets escorted to another speaking character I somehow assumed that they were Robot Legion and then gave the new speaker a Christopher Judge T'ealc voice. When I saw that it was supposed to be an Eternal Dynasty character, I again shrugged and rolled with it. Made reading this tale even more fun. It came off as a fun audio book to be for me. So congrats!