I'll definitely follow you on here, your demo did a good job of demonstrating what the game was about, as well as a few of the characters that will eventually be love interests. The writing was good and the mystery caught my attention so far, though there were a few style/grammatical oddities more toward the beginning, but that's something that can be worked on. I like the presentation of the game and the point and click elements, and the more realistic setting works well with the grim tone of the story so far.
Also Nina is adorable, I love her :D I'll look forward to the full release!!