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My favorite so far! Your story is extremely well paced, with a good hook and a satisfying conclusion, and your flow and clarity is a breath of fresh air.

Yay! Glad you liked it! I'm a big fan of recommending folks take extra time to lockdown a real good opening line/paragraph. Eyeballs are hard to grab!