Super strong opening -- I love the first person perspective, and the cheeky voice. The non-stereotypical dwarf figure is wonderful, too. What a great protagonist! There were some places where you switch between past and present tense, and one sentence in 3rd person that I think was probably meant to be first person. The ending felt a little rushed, too, and I didn't quite connect with it like I'd hoped. But the concept was solid and I'd love to read some more about this plucky dwarf one day!