Great ideas, particularly the prison serving as food storage for the vampires. You did a great job of developing a convincing relationship between the girl and the dog, especially given the word limit and time constraints. Good job!
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Thank you! That the vampires take blood from their populace on a regular basis is canon (see e.g. the sippy straw collars on the Drained models), and since prisoners would be close at hand and the vampires wouldn't need to worry about them getting too weak to work/fight, it felt natural to me that they'd be the first choice for a vampire desiring a snack.