Great game. Here are some takeaways which I'm sure you've already thought of:
- Text box could be more graphically appealing.
- Text should fade in and out in same way the text box does.
- Add voice lines and more SFX.
- Ending was sorta a let down.
- The scene transition was sometimes jarring. In the end, when the camera zooms out or zooms back in if you go back to the campfire is less jarring then the sudden camera replacement. I guess it doesn't quite work that well for top down games. It was fine for your last platform game. Maybe add a smooth lerping-type motion or maybe a small fade in/out or wipe (like how Zelda(?) does it).
Regarding the gameplay, you're getting better and better at the feeling of tightness and control. Although, it was a little hard to master the lighting and then attacking loop at first, it felt great in the end. Level design was top, too.
Can't say enough about your theme-ing too. Fitting and poetic, maybe.