I really love what I've seen of this VN, aside from a few sections that could use some more efficient grammar, it's all great. All of it.
Now to wait for the next update, so that I can use the detonate button again after I'm done.
Thank you so much for reading my visual novel!! I’ve put a LOT of work into it, and I’m happy you’ve enjoyed it!! Yes, my apologies - my grammar may not be amazing at times, I just tend to write how I speak, if that makes sense!! It’s all very imperfect, just like me lol :)
Finally someone has mentioned the detonate button lmaooo, you’ll find out what it means in the future!! ❤️❤️
Honestly, that button was the first thing I tried and it really took me by surprise what you did there lol.
But don't worry too much about the grammar, just a handful of words at most that I thought could use some change, nothing major but overall I did like how you wrote and paced each scene so far.
Aaand just like that, you got yourself a rent free space in my mind, I'll definitely check it out when it's here!