Wow, nice art and writing! I had a bug where my character was doubled after exiting the bar. And when i dropped in the water the game over window was hidden and only shown after i entered the store.
Thanks for playing! That is a known bug (see below) and it all has to do with colliding with the water, so it is thankfully avoidable -- it's been fixed and will be patched asap. I hope you were able to enjoy the game otherwise. :)