And now Jim with the weather!
You've put a lot of work into building the atmosphere here, and it really shows--I love touches like the different dialogue options being different sizes. The shaders, music (spooky cellos!) voice acting, etc all do a great job adding to the tension. It reminded me of Home, if you've played that one. (It might have fit better in a different jam, though, since there isn't really a deduction component.)