I'm guessing this is what you meant by saving werewolves for future projects? ;) I only have one gripe (not even a complaint, really) - you have a strange habit of putting the MC into situations that he just... accepts. Not sure about you but if I were dragged into a dungeon and thrown in a cell, the first thing I'd do is look for a way to escape. Even after, thrown into a room, I'd at least make the attempt to escape. We're talking about a man literally dying to get to his family but now just... accepts being a prisoner with no attempt at escape (at least until dinner) - you have to admit, this is rather odd behaviour. In any case, curious to see how this plays out although I suspect I already know the answer. lol
Actually, I don't find anything wrong with your writing. It looks more like you're skipping over things to get to the heart of the story you want to tell. I can understand that. Maybe what might help is imagine you're the one in a given situation and how you would react to it... and what it might take for you to come to terms with it. That can be as much of an adventure than the heart of the story you're trying to get to. Who knows what might happen. ;) (But for the love of all that is holy, no dancing teapots! lol)