Congrats on getting the vn up and finished in such a short amount of time!
I can tell you had an epic idea in mind, but with very surface-level interactions with the villagers and writing that feels more like a quick draft than a finished piece (with typos and long hard-to-read sentences, trails of thoughts that were hard to follow), the story didn't have as much impact on me as it could have.
The end section, where you have to keep picking the right theory about what's happening out of the two given, was very confusing, as most of the time both of the theories seemed to fit well. I had to just guess my way through it.
Hope you'll continue making visual novels, and will expand on your stories more so the endings are as impactful as you mean them to be!
Also big shame this game isn't about Neuro-sama, I think it might have actually fit well if the main girl was Neuro and the scientist was Vedal.