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Congrats on getting the vn up and finished in such a short amount of time!

I can tell you had an epic idea in mind, but with very surface-level interactions with the villagers and writing that feels more like a quick draft than a finished piece (with typos and long hard-to-read sentences, trails of thoughts that were hard to follow), the story didn't have as much impact on me as it could have.

The end section, where you have to keep picking the right theory about what's happening out of the two given, was very confusing, as most of the time both of the theories seemed to fit well. I had to just guess my way through it.

Hope you'll continue making visual novels, and will expand on your stories more so the endings are as impactful as you mean them to be!

Also big shame this game isn't about Neuro-sama, I think it might have actually fit well if the main girl was Neuro and the scientist was Vedal.

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I already work with someone else as a team to make VN's but thank you, I know i had some typos but i really did not have time to fix them, i did all the writing, directing and programming myself with a friend doing graphics and someone i met along the way doing most sound too, it was incredibly hectic and extremely tight on timing, i struggled a lot getting someone to proofred and when i did it was already too late and on top of the deadline.

The ending section is meant to be semi-challanging, just like every game has levels a mystery visual novel gets harder as you play too, the initial idea for the game had different endings depending what path you took but i did not have the time to implement that by a long shot, though its partially scripted and i can do it in the future.

As for the project being around neuro, i honestly did not expect people to make so many neuro games, i think people gravitated towards that cuz of vedal himself making a neuro game...

Either way i am thankful you played it and i hope you enjoyed it even if you did struggle at the final logic puzzle!